I finished!
Over the last couple of weeks I have been reading Gillespie and I, by Jane Harris. Now I have got to the end of it, I am confused…
The story is narrated by Harriet Baxter, a woman in her 70’s, and is split between her current life in 1930’s London, and her life in Glasgow in the 1880’s. We learn about her relationship with Ned Gillespie and his family, his struggle to get the recognition deserved for his art, and her role as friend and confidante to all, until tragedy hits the family. We also, in her current life, learn about her vague, but growing, fears for her safety. I won’t say more here because anything else is likely to be a massive spoiler!
I started the book thinking it was some sort of mystery, which it is, but it’s also a story about mental health issues, murder, loneliness, loss and betrayal, and I still don’t know exactly what role the protagonist played in the deeply painful events described. Harriet’s story is very much her own.
As a writer, I have often come across examples of the unreliable narrator in exercises, but this particular one has worked very well for multiple reasons.
Firstly, it’s not explicit that she really is an unreliable narrator: it could just be my imagination. That ambivalence about her honesty or otherwise is really powerful and such a great way of muddying the waters.
Secondly, it is not clear how much of what she says is factually true. Many points are debated and obviously we see her point of view, but there is no gauge to show whether she is lying or just putting her perception of events forward. There is always an explanation because she only tells the story she can explain.
Thirdly, the story she tells is allegedly about her time with the Gillespie family, and yet much of what she reports is through the prism of how Ned Gillespie might have viewed it (albeit from her point of view). That makes Ned unreliable too. His characteristics are a contradictory mishmash of blunt politeness, of honest self-censorship, that leave me questioning their interactions.
I started the book expecting a more genre-specific mystery and it took quite a while for me to realise I didn’t feel certain about Harriet, either in her behaviour or her reports of her behaviour. I can’t say more than that here, except it does explain why I thought it was so slow to get going!
From a writing point of view this was fascinating to unpick. The imagery, the style, the narrative technique, the characterisation and the setting were all very cleverly interwoven and this was a very tightly packed book, stylistically speaking.
From a reading point of view I was hoping for more of a payoff at the end, although the foreshadowing of what comes after the book is shut was another technique I have to consider further in my own work.
I can see this being a great reading group book or intensive study book, because it has so many facets to it that I probably missed quite a few, but for me personally, it is a real education in the power of the right narrative decision, and the right narrator.
It’s not a book I would naturally choose for a second read, but I wonder how I would view the story, knowing what I know now. It has definitely piqued my interest, that’s for sure!
Happy reading,
EJ
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